In The Great Gatsby, Fitzgerald reveals his cynical and judgmental
tone through his selection of words. When he describes Myrtle’s expression as “purposeless and inexplicable” (31), he is explaining
the increased decadence in ambitious lifestyles. By condemning this lifestyle
as “purposeless”, we can infer that Fitzgerald finds this pursuit of success
meaningless. He later explains that Myrtle’s eyes are “wide with jealous
terror” (31). Through the use of the word “terror”, Fitzgerald portrays the
degree of jealously in Myrtle: a common trait of the wealthy. Fitzgerald’s
observation further reveals the lack of morality in the story. Fitzgerald
continues to distinguish the traits of the wealthy class in his explanation of
Jay Gatsby: “The truth was …
meretricious beauty” (99). This suggests that Gatsby is surely an enlightened
individual, though he feels superiority over other members in society. The use
of “meretricious” suggests that the image Gatsby is trying to produce is false.
Not only does this reveal arrogance, but also selfish ambition. Fitzgerald also
goes on to describe Daisy’s voice as “full of money” (120). This shows us that
money is not only a significant part of Daisy’s life, but it also an aspect
that is in excess: another common feature of the wealthy class. The importance
of money further reveals the corruption in society and its goals. Through his
use of Diction, Fitzgerald establishes his petulant attitude towards the morals
of his society, distinguishing the distinct qualities of the upper class.
I agree with you when you talk about money corrupting people. It does cause greed and it does cause jealousy. I personally believe that you could have gone deeper with your commentary instead of just scratching the surface. You did however find good examples that helped to back your point so good job in that aspect. I understand where you are coming from with the judgmental tone, he does seem to be making fun of and insulting the characters of the book. The structure of your post could have been better and you could have made it flow a bit better but other than that, there is not much to complain about. Good job.
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